The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. Write a report of at least 150 words summarizing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates

the

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how many people watch channel one news each day in 12 months of the year. In general, it can be clearly seen that the number of viewers who watched TV news at 1pm had no chance,

whereas

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the rest witnessed

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fructuated trend over the given period. As for 6pm, there are nearly 4

million

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audiences watching the news

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January. The figure for it goes up and down in between before standing at 3.2

million

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in December. Turning to 9:30pm, it

experience

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experienced

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a slight increase to 3.7

million

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before a significant fall to 1

million

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in August, but later

returns

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returned

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to 3

million

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at the end

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of the year.

In contrast

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to 9:30pm, the number of viewers at 11

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starts

from

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May and reaches

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peak in August at 4

million

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before

plummeted

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plummeting

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considerably to 1

million

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. Regarding

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1pm, the data for it reaches the plateau from January to December at around 1.2

million

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pm, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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