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You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

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Dear Manager , I would like to inform you that on 22
august
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 2025, I
was check
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checked
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 in
your
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at your
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 hotel around 12 pm in room no 202 .
Next
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The next
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 day when I checked out around 1 pm , I
forget
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forgot
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 to take my job identity card . It was on the table of the right side couch .
Consequently
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, when I reached
at
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home , I
check
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checked
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 my all bags and it was not there .
Then
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 , it comes
in
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to
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 my mind that I forget in my hotel room .
However
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 , I cannot enter my job organization because it need
identity
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an identity
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 card for identification.
Moreover
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 , it takes two weeks to make a new card which is too much for me . I cannot wait for two weeks . Kindly , as soon as possible check your hotel room and inform me if you find anything there . I would suggest you that send me
through
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a speed post because it takes less time to reach out . You have my address already . Sincerely ,

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to use correct tenses consistently throughout your letter.
task achievement
Try to provide a more detailed explanation about how the items are essential for your job.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your paragraphs clearly focus on a single idea to improve clarity.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the key issue and the request for assistance.
coherence and cohesion
The structure of the letter follows a logical order, discussing the stay, the importance of items, and the request.
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