The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aisu2

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aisu2
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Aisu2
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The given line graph illustrates how many
shops
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were closed and opened in a country from 2011 to 2018. Generally speaking, the
number
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of both closed and opened
shops
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experienced a fall during the given time period. The
number
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of shop closures started out at just below 6,500 stores in 2011 and experienced a slight decline to approximately 6000
shops
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for the next
year
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.
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, in the following
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year
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this
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figure
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rose moderately to reach a high
point
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of just above 7,000 before experiencing a dip to hit a low
point
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of around 500
shops
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by 2015. From
this
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point
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, the
number
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of closed
shops
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recovered to just above 5,000, and
this
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number
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remained almost stable until 2018, recording a total decline of nearly 2000 closed
shops
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compared to the initial
figure
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recorded in its first
year
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.
In contrast
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to closures, the
number
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of new
shops
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that were opened
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started out at a peak of around 8,500
shops
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in 2011, and
this
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figure
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plunged to roughly 4000
shops
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in the subsequent
year
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. Following the initial decline, the
number
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of new
shops
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rose moderately to approximately 6,000
shops
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by 2014 before experiencing a moderate fall to 4000
shops
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again, which was the same level as three years ago.
This
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figure
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remained almost unchanged until 2017, and
then
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it dropped again to hit a low
point
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of 3000
shops
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by 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number, year, figure, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 3 times.
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