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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates the distribution of
use
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 of four
fuel
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 types for
electricity
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 generation
inMalaysia
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in Malaysia
,
Singapore
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, Thailand, South Korea and
Japan
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 in 2005, in percentage.
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, it can be seen that the
use
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 of
fuel
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 types
vary
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 significantly across the countries.
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, it is noticeable that the least widely used
fuel
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 in
electricity
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 generation is Petrol, with the exception of Thailand, which shows a large proportion
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%.
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,
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 no nuclear was used in
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the process
 of
electricity
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 generation in Thailand, a relatively large percentage
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use
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 of it is noticeable in the other 4 countries. Looking at the details, the most highly used fuels in Malaysia and
Singapore
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 to generate
electricity
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 are coal and lignite, by 61 and 42 per cent respectively. The biggest percentage
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 in South Korea belongs to hydro and wind,
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48% and in
Japan
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, it belongs to Nuclear. With regards to the least used fuels, the numbers are much less scattered. In Malaysia,
Singapore
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, South Korea and
Japan
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, the smallest figures belong to Petrol
fuel
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, which shares its with hydro and wind in
Singapore
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 and
Japan
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, fuel, electricity, singapore, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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