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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in five parts of the world in 2006.
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The tables compare five different contents in terms of potato
consumption
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 and
production
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 in the year 2006. Unite of
consumption
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 is measured in kilograms per individual and
production
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 is measured in million tonnes.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that Europe had the highest
consumption
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 of
potatoes
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,
while
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 Africa had the lowest.
Moreover
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.
Asia
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's
production
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 of
potatoes
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 was on top of other continents but South and Central
America
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 demonstrated the lowest figure. The consumers of
potatoes
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 were mostly in Europe with 96.1
kg
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 per
person
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, followed by North
America
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 which represented the second content with 57.9
kg
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 per
person
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.
Additionally
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, Central and South
America
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along with
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Asia
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 showed near figures with 25.8
kg
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 per
person
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 and 23.6
kg
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 per individual, respectively.
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, Africa had the lowest amount of potato
consumption
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 with 14.1
kg
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 per
person
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 in the given period. In terms of potato
production
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, most
potatoes
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 were produced in
Asia
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 with 131.2 million tonnes, North
America
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 was the second with 4.9 million tonnes lower than
Asia
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. South and Central
America
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 and Africa produced approximately similar quantities of
potatoes
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 (15.6
kg
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 per
person
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 and 16.4
kg
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 per
person
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, respectively).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, production, potatoes, asia, america, kg, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural capacity
  • Dietary preferences
  • Cultural significance
  • Economic affordability
  • Trade policies
  • Food security
  • Production levels
  • Consumption patterns
  • Imbalance
  • Global agricultural trends
  • Technological advancements
  • Supply chain enhancements
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