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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates how Malaysia, Singapore,
Thai
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, South Korea and Japan usage of four types of energy to produce electrical power in 2005. The numbers were measured in percentages.
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, the electrical generation varies from each of the given countries.
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, coal and lignite,
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an
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 average, were the most popular
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 compared to the others.
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, Japan was mostly relying on nuclear power with 49%
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 Thailand did not have any radioactive generators, 0%.
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, coal and lignite
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 popular in Malaysia and Singapore with 61% and 42% respectively,
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 Thailand was the least with only 3%.
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, based on the given types of electricity,
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 oil products
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in Thailand with
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36%, the others were around 2% to 3%. Unlike the others, South Korea's most
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 energy source was
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hydro and wind with 48%, but in Japan and
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 it was about 3%.

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