The chart shows projections for the global production by sector in 2024 and 2060.

The chart shows projections for the global production by sector in 2024 and 2060.
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the predicted global output across various industries for the years 2040 and 2060. The calibration is done in percentage. Looking from a broader view , services and manufacturing will continue to lead,
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agriculture and ICT are expected to see considerable declines over the
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period. Going from details , in both years , service industries are expected to be
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contributors,making up two-fifths(40%) of the total output in 2040, but slightly rising to just over two-fifths (41%) by 2060. Manufacturing activities ,
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will continue to be the
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contributor,surging marginally from just under a third (31%) in 2040 to
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in 2060. Meanwhile,raw materials will
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see a small hike from 15% to 16 % over the same period. A significant decline is forecasted in agricultural production,which is expected to fall from around 7% in 2040 to
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4% by 2060. Though the energy sector will maintain its share
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, contributing nearly 4% in both years. ICT will experience a noticeable drop, reducing from 3
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in the first year to
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timeline.

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