The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

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The pie graph provides key information about Individual devices in the age 18 to 25 age category used to watch

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in Canada in 2009 and 2019. The units are measured in proportion.

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, it is clear from the chart that in 2009 conventional

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achieved the highest percentage 34% compared with other sectors.

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, in 2019 conventional

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presented the lowest rate at 4%.

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In 2019 the flat-screen

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illustration showed the maximum percentage in

this

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year was at 27% .

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what the graph shows, tablets were in 2009 at the minimal per cent at only 5%. In 2019 the graph showed there was a jump in the number of devices. In terms of, the mobile phone it looks similar, the number slightly increased from 15% to 26% throughout the years.

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laptops in 2009 were in high percentage in 2019 showed a slight decrease to 12% under the expectations,

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desktop computers dropped from 18% to a lower rate of 12%.

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The pie charts below show the devices people in the age 18 to 25 age group used to watch TV in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some countries encourage foreign companies to open a branch office in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local businesses to expand rather than inviting foreign businesses to open branches. To what extent do you agree?

People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training . others belive they should be free to work in another coutnry if they wish . Discuess boh these views and give your opinion.