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The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka

The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
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The two maps illustrate the differences
of
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a
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Porth
harbour
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Harbour
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 between 2000 and the present
days
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.
Overall
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 , the
porth
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port
 was transformed from
rural
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a rural
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 to
commercial
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a commercial
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 zone. The area was substantially developed and modernised over the given time period.
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 the illustration, a public beach, car parks and a lofe boat territory remained untouchable. The north part of
zone
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the zone
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 was renovated, by increasing in number of docks and
a
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passenger ferries.
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, the same increase accurate for showers and toilets
in
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 the west side. Noticeably , the locations of
marina
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the marina
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 for private yachts and fishing boats were relocated for the convenience of visitors.
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, the southern spot was reconstructed for business purposes. The castle , which was
an
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abondened
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abandoned
 in 2000 , was converted into a hotel, owning the beach nearby.
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, new cafes and stores for
travelers
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 were launched with wonderful
view
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views
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 from the sea, the constructed facilities were connected by extra roads

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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