The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Butterfly life cycle

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Butterfly life cycle

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explain

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the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. It is clear from

diagram

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the Monarch butterfly's life cycle

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4 stages. The first phase is

egg

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which an adult butterfly lays an

egg

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in milkweed.

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after 14

days

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the

larva

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step starts by hatching from

egg

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to new

larva

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. In

this

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phase the

larva

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is a caterpillar on milkweed

lastly

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it changes the position to attachment.

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the Pupal point begins when the

larva

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converts to chrysalis after 10 days. After that, the emergence of

adult

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from the chrysalis converts to migrations south. The

last

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step

is come

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after

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6 months from the

last

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stage which grownup step in

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phase the migration south becomes the migration north and becomes able to mate

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with an

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egg

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lying. That led to the restart of the cycle again.

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, the Monarch butterfly's life period takes about 204 days to complete one chain and become an adult.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words egg, larva with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

life cycle
Monarch butterfly
eggs
milkweed plants
larvae
caterpillars
feed
chrysalis
pupa
metamorphosis
emerge
adult butterfly
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