The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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The two given maps demonstrate how the residential area looked in 2016 and how it will change in the future.

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, it is planned to open the space and extend the main path to all sides of the residence.

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, new common spaces will be built. In detail, in 2016 there was

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fence with gates which limited the park completely. In future, the fens will be demolished and the road, which was going from one gate to another will be extended and led in all directions. As regards common places, in the west-south part of the area new bench around the pond will be set and the flowers zone will be converted into a bush. At the same time, the flowers on the eastern side will be cut down and the playground will be erected

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the north part are suggested to be decreased so that it will be possible to open a picnic zone with a barbeque.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
park
playground
proposed changes
safety
families
children
layout
features
concerns
green spaces
sidewalks
lighting
accessibility
impact
community
outdoor activities
social interaction
property values
disruption
construction
residents

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The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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