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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the four different nations that the
amount
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 of
milk
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 was produced per
a
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year from 1990 to 2010. Generally speaking, three of the nations recorded a rise in the
amount
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 of
milk
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 manufacturing, except for one, which declined during the given time period. To start off, Guatemala saw a moderate increase in its
milk
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 production from 26,000
litres
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 in 1990 to a low of 84,000
litres
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 in 2010, which was the smallest increase among all nations.
Likewise
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, Tanzania
also
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 underwent a slight increase in the
amount
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 of
milk
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 production, which climbed by nearly 70,000
litres
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 from 87,000 in 1990 to 155,000.
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, the
amount
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 of
milk
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 manufactured in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 climbed vastly by approximately 200,000
lites
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litres
, rising from a 1990 high of 11,262,000
litres
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 to a high of 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010.
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, Australia was the only country
that
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where
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 the
amount
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 of
milk
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 produced per
one
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year fell down and changed the most during the 20-year period, plunging by around 2 million
litres
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 from 11,246,000
litres
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 to 9,165,000
lites
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litres
 in 2010.

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