The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children
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The map shows the development of changes in a residential area from 2016 to 2025 to enhance safety for families and children.
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, the differences from the previous layout are the placement of the ground and
a
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barbeque placement. The residential area will have a modification on both sides of the garden.
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from 2016, there was a pond in the middle of the benches and
flowers
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beside them.
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, there still were clusters of
flowers
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on the bottom
right
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and trees on the top
right
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. Since
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, the park has experienced significant changes. By now, the top
right
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corner has a chair, a desk and a barbeque place to have more quality time together. The
flowers
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placed in the left bottom already changed to bush.
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, the
flowers
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in the bottom
right
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change to playground for kid's activities. Several layouts are still in the same place like the pond and gain 1 new bench

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words flowers, right with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • park
  • playground
  • proposed changes
  • safety
  • families
  • children
  • layout
  • features
  • concerns
  • green spaces
  • sidewalks
  • lighting
  • accessibility
  • impact
  • community
  • outdoor activities
  • social interaction
  • property values
  • disruption
  • construction
  • residents
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