The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

this

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summary

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summary,

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we will illustrate the differences between a

park

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in 1980 and the same

park

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in the present,

first

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the first

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point we will mention is that in 1980 the

park

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had only two

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entrance

enterance

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entrance

gates one from the south and the other one on the west side of the

park

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however

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nowadays the same

park

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has 4 gates, one on each side of the square, the second main point we will discuss would be spaces, as we can see in 1980 there were a lot of empty spaces that could be used to make the

park

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more enjoyable yet safer for children and

also

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better for parents because kids could be playing near the trees and in 1980 rest benches were way too far from the trees unlike 2025 where we can see that managers added more desks near the trees, we can

also

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see that a Bush and a Playground area has been added for the kids using the spaces we talked about earlier,

this

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gives the

park

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more life in it and makes the kids happier,

finally

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, the changes between the

year

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years

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1980 and 2025 were massive and

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they

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made it a better

park

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for everyone, i'm wondering

how

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what

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would the

park

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look like

after

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apply

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20 years from now.

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Feb 27, 2025

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
park
playground
proposed changes
safety
families
children
layout
features
concerns
green spaces
sidewalks
lighting
accessibility
impact
community
outdoor activities
social interaction
property values
disruption
construction
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The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer, and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantage of this development outweighs the disadvantages?

Many people these days rely on traditional medicines rather than going to doctors. What are the causes? Is this a positive or negative development?

Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

An increasing number of professionals, such as, teachers and doctors are leaving their own countries to work in developed countries. What are the causes of this problems? What solutions can you suggest?