The maps below show a residential area with a park and playground in 2016 and the proposed changes for 2025 to make it safer for families and children

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we will illustrate the differences between a

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in 1980 and the same

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in the present,

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point we will mention is that in 1980 the

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had only two

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gates one from the south and the other one on the west side of the

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,

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nowadays the same

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has 4 gates, one on each side of the square, the second main point we will discuss would be spaces, as we can see in 1980 there were a lot of empty spaces that could be used to make the

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more enjoyable yet safer for children and

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better for parents because kids could be playing near the trees and in 1980 rest benches were way too far from the trees unlike 2025 where we can see that managers added more desks near the trees, we can

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see that a Bush and a Playground area has been added for the kids using the spaces we talked about earlier,

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gives the

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more life in it and makes the kids happier,

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, the changes between the

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1980 and 2025 were massive and

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made it a better

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for everyone, i'm wondering

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would the

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look like

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20 years from now.