The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie chart
compare
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the differences
of
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marital status between
the
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apply
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individuals
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of
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in
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Australia and Canada,
Overall
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, in both
countries
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most folks are either married or married but separated which is a sign of the fact that most of the society's
individuals
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are married. When it comes to Canada's Population, we can see how slim the numbers of divorced,
same sex
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same-sex
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marriage folks are,
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, the figures
of
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widowed and
singles
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single
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folks in Canada are pretty much similar
whereas
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more than half of the population are separated and roughly 30% are married.
On the other hand
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, Australia's
individuals
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had a better percentage when it came to married people,
therefore
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, the number of separated couples
were
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slightly less standing at 41% of the population,
However
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, for other situations
such
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as divorced,widowed, and single
individuals
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, numbers were significantly close, just like Canadians. In summary, most
individuals
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from both countries are either married or married but separated which is a good sign of a healthy and communative society.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words individuals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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