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The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below illustrates the world's
sales
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 of four digital
games
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 from 2000 to 2006. There are four types of
games
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: mobile phone, online, console, and handheld. Units are measured in billions of
dollars
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.
Overall
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, there were only two categories of
games
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 in 2000, which were console and handheld. The latter had the highest
sales
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 in the past 6 years, increasing from about 10
billion
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dollars
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 to almost 18
billion
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dollars
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.
On the other hand
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, the console
games
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 dropped significantly from 6
billion
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dollars
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 to just approximately 3
billion
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dollars
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, which ranked
last
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 among the others.
Furthermore
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, internet
games
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 began in 2001, and smartphone
games
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 started in 2002. Both types of game-play raised massively with 9
billion
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dollars
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, and 7
billion
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dollars
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 in 2006, respectively. In conclusion, there was an upward trend in
sales
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 of handheld, online, and mobile phones.
In contrast
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, the global
sales
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 of console
games
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 had a downside trend in the past 6 years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, dollars, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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