The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. what do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights. Do you think flights should be taxed more? Give reasons for your answers and include and relevant examples from your own experience.

In recent times, there has been a huge incline seen in flights for spare time, work or international trade. Cheap tickets and frequent flights are quite common nowadays. In

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essay, I shall explain both the positive and negative aspects before drawing a conclusion. The main advantage is Increasing job opportunities. Easy travel access increases the business networks around the world which indirectly increase the number of jobs and competitive pay packages for individuals that make their living easier . Another merit point is it reduces the cultural gaps. during their vacations, the family can spend their break time, exploring different places and interacting with the folks around them and can get more knowledge of their culture, languages, lifestyles and so on. The detrimental

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of increasing air crafts

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pollution and terrorists. In one travel,

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create a lot of noise and air pollution that adversely affects the atmosphere and the population living near the airports. Entry of terrorists in a country through

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to their livelihood. Many experts suggest that taxes should be raised to control the negative consequences.

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imposing higher taxes is not a viable solution as it only increases the burden for the public to pay more rather than doing

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, they should try to launch eco-friendly jets and

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their security.

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, travelling by aeroplane has demerits like rising pollutants in the wind and sound and threat to

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but putting more taxes is not a practical solution. Cheaper and frequent flight services have facilities for people in many ways and there is a timely demand for modernization.