you are getfing married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter Describe who you are going to marry - Tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule) - Explain why it's important for him/her to be at the wedding.
Dear Jenny,
Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. You will be happy to know that I am getting married on month 20th of Linking Words
march
. I am Capitalize word
March
wroting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to invite you to attend my wedding ceremony. You always wanted to attend anLinking Words
indian
wedding Change the capitalization
Indian
function
and believe me you are going to enjoy all the wedding rituals and functions related to Use synonyms
this
Indian wedding.
My fiance, Gaggi, is working with DBG company as a senior certified Mechanic. We met at my cousin's wedding 6 months ago for the first time and Linking Words
this
was a first sight love. He Linking Words
aproached
my parents for Correct your spelling
approached
Correct article usage
a marraige
marraige
proposal.
You must come one week in advance, as Correct your spelling
marriage
i
want to Change the capitalization
I
spent
enough time with you. Change the verb
spend
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
weeding
Correct your spelling
wedding
Use synonyms
function
Fix the agreement mistake
functions
such
as Mehandi, Linking Words
Ladies
sangeet, Batna, and Jagoo Change noun form
Lady's
Ladies'
is
5 days before the day of the Marriage. All the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
funtions
are very Correct your spelling
functions
intersting
, you will get all the taste of Punjabi folks and tradition. After these Correct your spelling
interesting
Use synonyms
function
on Fix the agreement mistake
functions
final
day of Add an article
the final
marriage
you will enjoy the stage Add a comma
marriage,
performnce
of Punjabi singer Rajveer Jawnda, which will be organized from Correct your spelling
performance
Correct article usage
the groom
groom
side. After the final Change noun form
groom's
function
" Dolly ceremony", I leave my Use synonyms
parents
home.
I know that you are Change noun form
parent's
parents'
also
researching Linking Words
on
Change preposition
apply
india's
culture and traditions. Change the capitalization
India's
Therefore
it is very important for you to attend the wedding, as you will get lots of information.
Hoping to see you at the wedding!
Yours with love,
Jashan.Linking Words
jshnjawanda1
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coherence and cohesion
Consider improving the logical flow by better organizing the ideas in each paragraph. For example, you might briefly introduce your fiancé and then discuss the wedding schedule in a more structured manner.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammatical errors, as these can sometimes distract from your overall message, such as 'month 20th of march' and 'wroting'.
positive
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, making it feel personal and heartfelt, which is great for a wedding invitation!
positive
You have included cultural elements of the wedding, which adds richness to your letter and can engage your friend’s interest.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,