you are getfing married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter Describe who you are going to marry - Tell what will happen on the wedding day (the schedule) - Explain why it's important for him/her to be at the wedding.

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Dear Jenny, Hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. You will be happy to know that I am getting married on month 20th of
march
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March
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. I am
wroting
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writing
this
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letter to invite you to attend my wedding ceremony. You always wanted to attend an
indian
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Indian
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wedding
function
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and believe me you are going to enjoy all the wedding rituals and functions related to
this
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Indian wedding. My fiance, Gaggi, is working with DBG company as a senior certified Mechanic. We met at my cousin's wedding 6 months ago for the first time and
this
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was a first sight love. He
aproached
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approached
my parents for
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a marraige
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marraige
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marriage
proposal. You must come one week in advance, as
i
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I
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want to
spent
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enough time with you.
Meanwhile
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weeding
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wedding
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function
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functions
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such
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as Mehandi,
Ladies
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Lady's
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sangeet, Batna, and Jagoo
is
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are
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5 days before the day of the Marriage. All the
funtions
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functions
are very
intersting
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interesting
, you will get all the taste of Punjabi folks and tradition. After these
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function
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functions
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on
final
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the final
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day of
marriage
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marriage,
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you will enjoy the stage
performnce
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performance
of Punjabi singer Rajveer Jawnda, which will be organized from
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the groom
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groom
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groom's
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side. After the final
function
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" Dolly ceremony", I leave my
parents
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parent's
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home. I know that you are
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researching
on
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apply
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india's
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India's
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culture and traditions.
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it is very important for you to attend the wedding, as you will get lots of information. Hoping to see you at the wedding! Yours with love, Jashan.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider improving the logical flow by better organizing the ideas in each paragraph. For example, you might briefly introduce your fiancé and then discuss the wedding schedule in a more structured manner.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread for spelling and grammatical errors, as these can sometimes distract from your overall message, such as 'month 20th of march' and 'wroting'.
positive
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, making it feel personal and heartfelt, which is great for a wedding invitation!
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You have included cultural elements of the wedding, which adds richness to your letter and can engage your friend’s interest.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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