You have a suggestion for a park nearby where you live. Write a letter to your city’s council. In your letter include: •what your suggestion is •why you think this suggestion will improve the park •when you would like to see this suggestion in action

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that must be included in the park Fresh Garden, which is

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Moffatt Avenue.

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that the letter is structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Try to group similar ideas together in your paragraphs.

task achievement

Make sure to clearly outline your suggestion in detail, including the benefits it would bring to the park.

suitable writing tone

Your letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is appropriate for addressing the city council.

greeting and closing

It's good that you started with a friendly greeting, showing your consideration for the reader's well-being.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

41 words

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