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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changing quantity of residents in rural to urban areas in three countries. The horizontal axis demonstrates the time period with a prediction for future years. The vertical axis represents
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 number of people in millions. There are 3 lines which represent 3 countries that start approximately from the same number of people. Iran started from the least amount of individuals which was equivalent to 8
million
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 and took the leadership
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 of the time period with 95
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. Russia which is illustrated by the blue line take an initial quantity of 15
million
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 and has constant growth throughout the entire chronology and will end with a terminal number of 85
million
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 and take the 2nd place . The Indonesia have the lowest shift . It starts from 10
million
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 and will finish with 30
million
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 and will have no changes from 2020 to 2025.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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