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The line graph below shows average carbon dioxide (co²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows average carbon dioxide (co²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the level of
carbon
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dioxide
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 (CO2)
emissions
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 per person in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal, from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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, the levels of
carbon
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dioxide
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 emission per person drastically increased in Italy and Portugal,
on the other hand
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, the levels dropped in the United Kingdom and
Sweden
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 over the year. In 1967, The
volume
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 of
Carbon
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dioxide
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emissions
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 was major in Italy and Portugal. Italy was the largest country to have
Carbon
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dioxide
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emissions
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 as compared to Portugal. The
emissions
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 of CO2 in Portugal increased to around 3 metric
tons
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 in 1987,
whereas
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 Italy started off with a higher
volume
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 of 4 metric
tons
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 and increased to 6 in 1977. The
Volume
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 of
emissions
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 drastically increased in Portugal in 1997 a little above 4,
while
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 Italy saw a slight drop in 1987 and climbed up to 7 metric
tons
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 in the next 10 years. In 2007 Portugal slightly increased in
volume
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 to around 5 metric
tons
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, and Italy settled in at 7. In the UK and
Sweden
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, the
volume
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 of CO2 emission was decreasing over the given period of time.
However
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, in the year 1997,
Sweden
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 saw an increase in the
volume
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 of CO2
emissions
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 to 10 metric
tons
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 in 1977 from a little above 8. It drastically fell to somewhere around 7 metric
tons
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 in 1987 after which it steadily fell to almost 5 in 2007, On the other, hand UK had a steady drop over the given years from around 11 metric
tons
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 in 1967 to just below 10 in 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, co, emissions, sweden, volume, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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