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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below indicates the production and
consumption
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 of
oil
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 in China from 1982 to 2006. Units are measured in millions of
barrels
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 per day.
Overall
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, both types of use started at the same amount with about 2
million
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barrels
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 per day in 1982.
Firstly
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,
oil
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 production increased to 3
million
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barrels
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 in the first 4 years. After that, there was a constant from 1986 to 1998 but began to rise again with approximately 3.5
million
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barrels
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 in 2006.
On the other hand
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,
oil
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consumption
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 was still behind manufacturing from 1982 to 1990 but it increased drastically from 2
million
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barrels
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 to 6
million
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barrels
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 in 2006 and
also
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 showed a continuously upward trend. In conclusion,
although
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 the use of
oil
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 was lower than the
consumption
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 in China from 1982 to 1992, everything changed massively after 1994. So, the
consumption
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 of
oil
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 massively grew and the number is far away from the production trend.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, oil, barrels, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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