You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him.

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Dear Mike, I hope that you are doing fine upon receiving my letter. I am writing you a letter because I found out in the news

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week that you are the top performer

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party's

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and the good thing

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you are the

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singer of my nephew. He talks a lot about you that i why I would like to surprise him.

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I would invite you to be his special guest

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his birthday party. If you

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mind you will perform his

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songs

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and

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. We do many games as well and you are invited to participate too. We will prepare different types of cuisine and

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sure our

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will be happy. I hope

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your letter into clear paragraphs. For example, separate your introduction, the invitation details, and closing remarks into distinct sections.

task achievement

Make sure to use more formal language as this is an invitation to an artist. Phrases like 'I would like to surprise him' could be adjusted to sound more polite, for example, 'It would be wonderful if you could join us.'

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The intent to surprise your nephew with his favorite singer is a lovely sentiment that comes through clearly.

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You included specific details about the event, such as games and food, which adds to the invitation's appeal.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

125 words

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You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him.

The Closing

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we resolve this trend? What punishment method should be used, in your opinion?

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents.

Some people believe that government should financially support retired people others feel that those who have retired pay to support themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.