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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter •say how you found out about the plans •explain what problems your neighborhood will face •suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear
sir
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/madam, I am writing
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 letter to express my concern related to the negative feedback
i
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I
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 have analysed from residents around the area where
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I
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 was planning to construct a newly designed airport. I was given the responsibility by
headoffice
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the office
 branch of
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the internationl
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internationl
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international
 development and
welfare authority
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Welfare Authority
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if
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of
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toronto
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Toronto
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to begin
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 a plan to build
a
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 airport because of the inconviniency people conquer residing in
city
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the city
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Toronto
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of Toronto
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. After considering all the traits,
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 have figured out that some of the houses
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 to
demolished
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due to
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 lack of space surroundings.
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,
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a
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huge construction plan and going to take several months which can lead to inclined noise
polluted
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and polluted
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 air
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 dust.
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, after consulting the society members nobody agreed to coordinate which is becoming a hindrance for us.
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, certain measures are decided
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 our team members
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 as
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 rendering all the residents with
another residential areas
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another residential area
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 for
temporary
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a temporary
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 period or till the construction is completed.
Transporatation
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Transportation
 for shifting the household will fully be provided by us. It will be a great help
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 you if you will figure
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 out by insisting
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 people of your area by explaining
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to them
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 the measures we are offering them as an alternative. I look
forwards
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forward
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for
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to
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 your response. Yours
sincerly
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sincerely
, Ritika
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure to address the letter to the appropriate authority or person, which will give a clearer structure. A more formal opening, such as 'Dear [Name/Title]', is also preferable.
task achievement
Make sure to elaborate more on the problems the neighborhood will face and provide a more detailed explanation of the solutions offered.
coherence and cohesion
Check for spelling errors and typos (e.g., 'i' should be 'I', 'inconviniency' should be 'inconvenience') to enhance professionalism.
task achievement
You have highlighted the residents' concerns and the need for alternative accommodations, showing you are considering their needs.
task achievement
The intention to provide transport for shifting the households is a positive effort that shows empathy and care.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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