Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion, give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Many people opine that

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is one of the most important subjects because it helps us understand the past

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showing the development of cultures and civilizations,

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others argue that in our modern world,

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and

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are more important than the former. In

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we will be analyzing both views of

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presenting my opinion. As we know, the past is a key thing to learn, as we learn historical events, examine how the old days

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shaped and

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to shape global, national and local relationships between societies and people,

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the causes of wars and the revolution that took place in the past, we can inspect human behaviours in these times and how they handled it.

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learning the

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of medicine and healthcare, now doctors can learn

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mistakes,

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leading to better ways to

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surgeries or

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a specific illness.

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,

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we know one of the most important if not the most important

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in our generation is

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,

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we use social media, electronic devices, and so much more on a daily basis, so we consider

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and

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to have more importance today

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the fact they solve real problems. As exemplified

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, we used scientific experiments to find a vaccine

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the lives of millions of individuals. The thing

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with

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argument, is that

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can help enhance

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, and

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and

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can help discover new historical

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,

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as examining the age of a specific fossil, we can use

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experiments for that,

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we can use

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to offer context for technological advancements and so on.

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difference in opinions,

History

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plays an important role in our cultural identity,

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pivotal in

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modern times, in that

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we can say they are both valuable subjects, each serving its own purpose.