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You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear Guru, Hope you are doing well today. I am thrilled to know about the volunteering that you will do at the festival. I really want to know what type of festival it will be and where
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 going to be held and at what place
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I am excited and happy for you at the same time that you chose to do
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 and I want to see you doing
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 in real . That's why I want to know the timing, place and about the event.
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, what you will do there? What will be your duties as a volunteer ? I've never thought that you would do
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 in your life but you proved me wrong . Now, I want to see you doing
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 and will make sure to click pictures on your every move . I have been trying to do
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 for so long but unfortunately, I haven't got the chance to do it. Could you please tell me if the event organisers want more volunteers? And if I want to apply
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 what will be the procedure? I will be waiting for your reply. Hope to see you soon and take care. Yours sincerely, Hk

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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing the questions in your letter to make it clearer and more logical. For example, you could group the questions related to the festival's details together.
task achievement
Try to use a more formal tone in your letter to match the context, as it's a letter to a friend but still about a volunteering opportunity. Avoid phrases like 'doing this in real.'
positive
Your enthusiasm for your friend's volunteering is clearly expressed, which adds a friendly tone to the letter.
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You cover all the necessary questions that were asked in the task prompt.
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