The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. The blue line represents
petroleum
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, and the grey line corresponds to coal,
while
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the orange dotted line indicates natural
gas
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.
To begin
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with, In 1981, coal
had
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used 80
units
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of energy and it dropped to 40 between 1981 and 1985, and
then
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again raised to 60
units
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in the year 1986 and remained stable with 40
units
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upto
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up to
the year 2000.
The natural
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Natural
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gas
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started with 40
units
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of energy and didn't
changed
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until 1990 and suddenly peaked from 1991 to 2000.
Although
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petroleum
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used 100
units
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in 1981 it slightly increased to 140
units
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up to 1985 but again plummeted to 100
units
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by 1991.
Then
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it again peaked
to
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at
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140
units
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by the year 2000. In conclusion,
Petroleum
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produced
the
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a
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higher level of fuel compared to natural
gas
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and coal.
whereas
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natural
gas
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is in the 2nd level after
petroleum
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followed by coal.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, gas, units with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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