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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the data about
production
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 ranges of 3 important different types of fuels in
United
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the United
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kingdom
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Kingdom
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 over 19 years. One of the most
noticeble
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noticeable
 features in the given graph is natural gas which has dramatically increased from 40
units
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 to 105
units
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 in the years
of
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apply
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1981 to 2000.
On the other hand
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, The
production
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 of coal has
decresed
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decreased
 to 40%
percent
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per cent
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 from 80% of energy
units
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.
Firstly
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, By comparing the 3 various fuels in the UK. Petroleum
is fluctuating
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 from
starting
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beginning
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 to
ending
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.But
overall
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 petroleum has
rose
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risen
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 from 90
units
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 to 140
units
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 in the year of 1986.
However
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, it has seen
downfall
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a downfall
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 in 1991.Suddenly, it skyrocketed from 1991 to 2000 to
his
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its
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 original level in 1991.
In addition
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 to
this
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. The
production
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 of natural gas and coal contradicts
eachother
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each other
.Coal has dropped its
production
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 from 80 to 28 energy
units
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.Natural gas has
remain
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remained
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 second position with 105 energy
units
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 after petroleum in the span of 
19years
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19 years
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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