The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014

The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014
Depicted in the table were the prices of a cup of
coffee
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in six different
cities
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in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
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, from 2010 to 2014, pronounced changes could be seen in the
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cost in Melbourne and Sydney,
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that of Brisbane plateaued.
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,
remaining
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cities
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saw minimal increases. To commence with Melbourne and Sydney, in 2010, their
coffee
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prices led the market with $2.4 and $2.8
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a
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cup, which increased significantly after a 4-year period ( to $2.9 and 3.17 ) making a considerable change of 20.8% and 13.2%, respectively. Meanwhile, being the
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cities
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having the most expensive
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price ($2.25), Brisbane’s price stabilized at $2.25 for the 4 years surveyed. With regard to other
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, from 2010 to 2014, Canberra, Adelaide and Perth
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coffee
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in these
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saw
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price
increased
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from $1.6, $1.87 and $2.1 to $1.7, $2. and $2.25, respectively, with their percentage deviation ranging from 6.25% to 7.1%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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