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make up 32% of the
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The statement that now is the best time in history to be living is a highly debatable one. On one hand, it is true that modern society has made great strides in terms of technological advancement, medical breakthroughs, and improved living standards. On the other hand, there are still many issues that plague our world, such as poverty, inequality, and environmental degradation. Therefore, it is difficult to definitively say that now is the best time in history to be living.
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