IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the cop in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. Say what else you could do for the family give me a reason for wanting to job.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Sir Madam, I am writing
this
Linking Words
 letter to express my interest in teaching
Use synonyms
tamil
Change the capitalization
Tamil
show examples
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
 your
children
Use synonyms
. I came across
this
Linking Words
 news in
advertisement
Add an article
an advertisement
the advertisement
show examples
 from The Hindu Newspaper. I have
Correct article usage
an undergraduation
show examples
undergraduation
Correct your spelling
undergraduate
 in
Use synonyms
tamil
Change the capitalization
Tamil
show examples
 and
post graduation
Add a hyphen
post-graduation
show examples
 in
literature
Add an article
the literature
show examples
 of
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the tamil
show examples
tamil
Change the capitalization
Tamil
show examples
 language.
Moreover
Linking Words
, I have experience
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
teaching
Use synonyms
tamil
Change the capitalization
Tamil
show examples
 to
children
Use synonyms
 for 10 years.
In addition
Linking Words
, I was awarded
with
Remove the preposition
apply
show examples
The Best Teacher for the year 2024. I am very passionate about teaching languages to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
children
Use synonyms
 since I don't have any
children
Use synonyms
. So, I am very fond of
children
Use synonyms
 and love to spend time with them.
Apart from
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
, I mastered
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
Computer skills
such
Linking Words
 as Excel, Word, PowerPoint and artificial intelligence. So, I can be helpful in managing the household income and expenses data.
Additionally
Linking Words
, I can help with other Indian native languages teaching for the
children
Use synonyms
. I always wanted to relocate and live in Australia. It was my childhood dream.
However
Linking Words
,
due to
Linking Words
 financial
constraints
Add a comma
constraints,
show examples
 I could not
acheive
Correct your spelling
achieve
 it. I request you to consider my position as a
Tamil
Use synonyms
 teacher. I am looking forward to your prompt response
on
Change preposition
to
show examples
 my job application Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
Make sure to address the recipient correctly (e.g., 'Dear [Names or Title]') to enhance formality and correctness.
coherence and cohesion
Consider developing your paragraphs with clearer topic sentences to improve logical flow.
task achievement
There are a few minor spelling errors (e.g., 'undergraduation' should be 'undergraduate' and 'acheive' should be 'achieve'). Be sure to proofread for these small mistakes.
task achievement
Your extensive experience in teaching Tamil and your passion for working with children are convincingly presented.
task achievement
Your offer to help with computer skills and other Indian languages shows additional value you can bring to the family.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: