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Below is a map of the town of Bellingham whose population increased considerably between 1980 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Below is a map of the town of Bellingham whose population increased considerably between 1980 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the
development
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 of the
Bellingham
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 city between 1980 and 2019.
Overall
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, there was a substantial increase in the size of
Bellingham
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. The growth could be seen from the residential area and the establishment of various public services and infrastructure over the years. The first major
development
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 began in 1990 with the establishment of the
railway
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 line. Over the next decade, the town of
Bellingham
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 grew alongside the major road and train station. In 1993, A school was built in
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 area, and a hospital was built in 2001 near the
railway
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 station. Between 2010 and 2019, the second largest phase of
development
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 occurred.
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 began with the building of the freeway in 2010.
After
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this
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,
Bellingham
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 grew dramatically
due to
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 the housing
development
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 assisted by the government alongside the freeway, main roads, and
railway
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line
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. Another addition to the town in
this
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 period was the construction of a sports stadium in 2012 near the freeway, where it intersects with
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railway
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the railway
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words development, bellingham, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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