Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. “Fatherhood ought to emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals arguing that Fatherhood ought to

emphasised

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as much as motherhood.

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some may disagree,

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would argue that

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should be given as much importance as

mothers

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in deciding whether or not to have a

child

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.From my perspective, taking

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decision helps create a more stable and happy family

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environment

.

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, there is an

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argument

to be made that

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fathers

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do not help

birth

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the children they most definitely help take care of the

child

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after its

birth

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.

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, after a

child

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is born ,

fathers

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are the ones that pay the hospital bill , buy all the necessary items

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as diapers , milk , trolleys and etc.

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this

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reason, it is evident that

fathers

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create a

peacefull

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peaceful

and

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financially

stress free

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enviorment

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environment

for the

child

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and mother.What is more, even before

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child

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childbirth

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birth

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men take up

majority

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of the

house

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household

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responsibiltes

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responsibilities

as

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child

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-bearing

mothers

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cannot effectively perform

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task

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.

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being the case it can

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assumed that , if

fathers

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are tasked and expected to perform certain duties before

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child

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childbirth

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birth

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and pay for

everthing

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everything

after , they should

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be involed

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involed

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involved

in deciding whether or not to have babies. In terms of the

idea

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that women who solely decide whether or not

have

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babies end up responsible for bringing the

child

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up. I firmly believe that

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are wrong because even if the

women

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is

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the main decision maker and chooses to have a

child

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against the

man

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choice , husbands still do their duty and

wholey

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wholly

support their

wifes

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wives

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and

child

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.

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, a study done in 2019 showed that 89% of men stayed and supported their wives through and after

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child

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childbirth

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birth

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even if they were not ready for a

child

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.

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, it is clear regardless of

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apply

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who is responsible for choosing whether to have kids ,

fathers

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fullfil

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fulfil

their

responsibilites

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responsibilities

.

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,

with

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apply

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a

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continuation

in

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the

idea

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that decision-making

mothers

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suppor

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support

the

child

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harbors the

idea

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in the rest of

female

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the female

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population that their choice will end them as single

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which is entirely false and without

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.With

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in mind, we have to put an end to

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idea

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the idea

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that women

who

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are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads

on

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to them being responsible for bringing the children up.

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, the overwhelming evidence seems to suggest that

fathers

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should be given as much respect and emphasis as

mothers

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as they too play a key role in the

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child

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upbringing and well-being. In my humble opinion, the concept of

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being the ones with the power to choose when to start a family is a trend that needs to be stopped as it can lead to greater issues in

family's

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families

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.