You are going to travel abroad for two months and while you are away a friend would like to live in your apartment. Write to the owner of the apartment explaining the situation. In your letter: • explain that you are going to travel abroad • describe your friend and say why he/she would be a good tenant • ask whether the owner will agree to this.

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Dear Laura. hello there, I hope you are doing well today. I would like to tell you about my trip. I am going to go to New Zealand for two months. It is

business

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trip,

also

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after the job

done

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is done

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well I hope.

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will take

sveral

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several

days for me to

having

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have

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there good time

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there.

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furthuremore

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Furthermore

go to

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going

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sightseeing,

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is my weakness,

while

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I go to

new

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country, I always try to go

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sightseeing. I would like to ask you to give my friend able to stay in my apartment,

while

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I am

being

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abroad. He is

really

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good boy and likes

quit

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quiet

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times

especially

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, especially

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after

the

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work. He is very far from his office and asked me to let

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apply

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him

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stay in my

apartmant

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apartment

during my trip. By the way, I know, you do not like pets and he does not have pets, So he is alone,

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he is

clean

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boy and likes clean. It will be my pleasure to agree that, Mis Laure. By the way, I have been thinking about your presents. could be

parfume

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perfume

. which

parfume

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perfume

would you like to have Mis Laura? Yours Sincerely. Harry

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coherence

You might want to organize your ideas a bit more clearly. Try to separate the explanation of your trip, introduction of your friend, and the request to the landlord into distinct paragraphs.

task achievement

Ensure that you use more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of saying 'able to stay', you could say 'to stay'. Also check for grammar and spelling errors, such as 'sveral' and 'furthuremore'.

positive

You expressed your excitement about your trip, which adds a personal touch to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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