The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph and bar chart display information about travel to and from the United Kingdom from 1979 to 1999 , and show the most
favorite
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favourite
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countries for British people to
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visit
in 1999.
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,
it is clear that
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the
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British
travelers
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travel abroad the most compared to overseas residents who visit the UK.
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, France is the most popular
distenation
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destination
for
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Uk residents to visit,
while
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Turkey is the least popular country to visit. In 1979, both the United
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vistors
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visitors
from abroad and Britain residents
traveling
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travelling
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worldwide were nearly 10%. On the one hand, the United Kingdom
travelers
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rate increased rapidly,
then
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began to rise and reach
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peak by 1999.
On the other hand
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, foreigners tourist percentage
remainded
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remained
steady in 5 year period. After that,
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started to grow gradually and stopped at approximately 28%
in
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the end of the period. In terms of the most popular countries for
british
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British
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tourists, France comes in the first place as the most visited country by the Brits at about 10%.
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, Spain
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8% and
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, the US
nearly
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4%.
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,
Grece
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Greece
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and Turkey both come
last
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by 3% and 2% in the chart.

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