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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons relevant
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas around the world.
Overall
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, Central
Asia
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 has the highest percentage of agricultural
use
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 in comparison with the other countries.
Likewise
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, the industrial
use
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 in Europe is wider
in contrast
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 to the rest. In the same way, South Africa is ranked as having the largest ratio of domestic
use
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. For the agricultural
use
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, Europe has the lowest proportion.
However
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,
Asia
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 and Africa have the highest rates. Unlike North America, the share is lower by approximately 40%. For domestic
use
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, it's almost equal in some countries.
Moreover
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, the South America ratio is 19% which is significantly more compared to Central
Asia
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.
Although
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,
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industrial
use
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 in Europe is Comparable to North America it's slightly higher which is an indication that it's ranked as the highest. Unlikely, the Central
Asia
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 rate is 5% which is the lowest among
this
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 list.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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