"The pie charts display the percentage of users on five different social networks in 2010 and predicted figures for 2018."

"The pie charts display the percentage of users on five different social networks in 2010 and predicted figures for 2018."
IELTS Writing Task Chart for "The pie charts display the percentage of users on five different social networks in 2010 and predicted figures for 2018."
The pie chart below illustrates the proportion of usage of 5 different social media sites in 2010 and projects the change of these proportions in 2018
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, Facebook was the first most favourite social media in 2010 and it is predicted to increase its
market
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shares by around a quarter. Twitter was the second most used social platform in 2010 and it will remain steady and keep its own proportion of the
market
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. bebo which had less than 10 per
cent
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of the
market
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will disappear in 2018. the fame of Pinterest and Google Plus will be decreased dramatically by 2018. in 2010, Facebook with nearly half of the
market
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was the first popular social network among British users, and it will grow significantly by 2018 by gaining another quarter of the
market
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share and will still remain the first favourite social network in Britain. in 2010 Twitter was the second favourite social media in the UK with 18.33 per
cent
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of the
market
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share and by 2018, it is predicted that will remain steady and keep its fame and popularity among British people.
on the other hand
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, the other 3 social network that had a good amount of users in 2010, will lose their popularity in Britain. it is projected that by 2018 bebo which had 8.17 of the
market
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in 2010, will disappear. Pinterest and Google Plus which had 16.95 per
cent
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and 10.42 per
cent
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respectively, will lose around half of their
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and decline dramatically by below half of their per
cent
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in 2010 with 7.25 per
cent
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for Pinterest and 2.90 for Google Plus.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words market, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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