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Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear Pat, It's been a long time since we had a discussion, I heard you're doing some voluntary
task
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 at a festival. I'm getting very curious about what kind of voluntary job at the festival. Could you provide some information regarding the location of the event
.
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As well as
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, when it could be commenced. Let me ask for some details, Actually what kind of task
you
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 do at the festival if possible elaborate on you're effort so that I can visualize it. I have a college vacation for 2 months. So, In my spare time I’
d
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 like to be
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apply
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involved with
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a job
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 as a volunteer. Kindly call on the administrator for any requirement for
voluntary
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a voluntary
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 trial. If yes, could you assist me with the signup?
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, I’m excited to get that experience, If I got I’ll be over the moon. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Lathanagaraju

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coherence cohesion
Make sure to use clear and concise sentences to enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
Try to include a separate closing statement to wrap up your letter nicely.
task achievement
Ensure that all parts of the task are fully addressed, such as the type of festival more clearly.
task achievement
Your enthusiasm about volunteering is very engaging and positive!
task achievement
The informal tone is quite appropriate for a letter to a friend.
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