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The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provides data about three possible places for the location of a new grocery store (A,
B
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 and C) in Ellington.
Overall
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, location A is placed next to the traffic-free
zone
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,
whereas
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 C is in the south of the
city
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 and
the
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apply
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B
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in
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is in
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 the
northweast
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northwest
northeast
 of the countryside. So,
it is clear that
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 A receives an important peak
zone
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 to the shop.
Firstly
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, supermarket A is placed in the residential
zone
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, between the traffic-free
zone
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 and the railway,
while
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 site
B
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 is located in the countryside near the motorway.
Moreover
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, is far away from
neighbourhood
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the neighbourhood
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 and the airport.
Conversely
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, the supermarket C is in the south of the
city
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, in the countryside.
However
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, it is near the neighbourhood, the industrial
zone
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 and it is next to the railway,
while
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 place
B
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 is away from urban areas of the
city
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.
However
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, A is in the middle of the
city
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 and the rest residential
location
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locations
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, zone, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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