You recently came across an advertisement that you think your friend would like. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Explain where you saw the advertisement. •Describe the product. •Explain why you think it would be useful for your friend.

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Dear Manish, Hope you are doing great. I am writing

this

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letter to suggest a product that you

were

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have been

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looking

for

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for for

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a long time. I, recently, saw an advertisement on social media regarding sports

shoes

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for adults. It was a short video which demonstrated the features of the product. One of the salient features of the

shoes

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shown in the marketing campaign was that

shoes

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were customisable which was your key requirement, considering the special needs of your feet.

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the company'

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company'

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company's

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collection of

shoes

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has a wide range of

asthetic

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aesthetic

designs and

colors

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colours

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, catering to

tastes

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the tastes

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of people

accross

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across

ages. As you were looking for a comfortable pair of running

shoes

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specifically designed for you,

this

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offers you a very good option to consider.

Company

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The company

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has a showroom near to your place where you can try

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out. I will share

you

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apply

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the advertisement video link and I hope you will like

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Pleaes

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Please

don't hesitate to reach out to me if you need additional details. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Regards,

Sumit

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Submit

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to closely proofread for minor grammatical errors, such as 'company'' which should be 'the company's'.

Task Achievement

Clarify phrases like 'you were looking for a long time' to indicate that it is a recent need, creating a sense of urgency.

Coherence and Cohesion

Consider breaking down longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability.

Task Achievement

The letter maintains a warm tone and effectively engages with the friend, fulfilling the requirement of writing a personal letter.

Task Achievement

The advertisement is described in a way that aligns with the friend's needs, showing good task engagement.

2
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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