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The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the distribution of the population of New Zealand across four
age
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 brackets between 2011 and 2012
along with
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 the corresponding figure for percentage change.
Overall
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, the number of people who were in the 40-60 and over 65
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 groups witnessed an upward trend
while
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 the opposite was true for the remaining
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 brackets.
Additionally
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, individuals aged 15-39 took precedence in the total population of New Zealand
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 the under-15 and over-65
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 groups exhibited the least figures. In detail, people aged 15-39 occupied a vast majority of one-third of New Zealand's population approximately 1520000 in 2011,
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, it slightly declined by 2% to 1500000 in 2012.
Secondly
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, people who were 40-60 years old witnessed a moderate rise of 6% from 1400000 in 2011 to 1460000 in 2012. Moving on to the remaining categories, the under 15
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 bracket's count in 2011 was 801750
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 the above 65
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 group's figure was lower at 500000.
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, since a significant growth of 4%, the latter surpassed the former in 2012 roughly 900000 and 800000 respectively

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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