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In your letter: Tell the manager your decision and the reason Describe what you have learnt in your current job Ask the manager to write to you a reference letter. You have decided to leave your current job even though you enjoy it . Write a letter to inform your manager of your decision.

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. My name is Mihir Patel, and I have been with working marketing department since
last
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 year. I
belive
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believe
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 that it is my fortunate to be a part of your workplace, and my the best opportunity to learn marketing
stratigies
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strategies
as well as
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 various tools to build a portfolio. Luckily, I am surrounded
not
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by not
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 only well-experienced seniors but
also
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 helpful colleagues. I would not have shown tremendous growth at
workplace
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the workplace
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 without them.
However
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, I have decided to leave
this
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 job. My family and I are planning to move to
city
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the city
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 area, as we desire to enroll our children into
reputed
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a reputed
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 educational
insitute
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institute
.
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, I need to leave
this
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 job, as I will not be able
work
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 here. It was a tough decision to make for me, as I am enjoying my time working here.
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, I would like to request a reference letter, showing my positing, working duration, salary and achievements. It will be
benifical
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beneficial
 to find a new job in the city. Thank you for your understanding, and continuous support.
Your
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You're
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 truthfully, Mihir.

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coherence and cohesion
Consider improving the logical flow by clearly separating your reasons for leaving and your request for a reference letter.
language accuracy
Be mindful of spelling errors, such as 'belive' (believe), 'stratigies' (strategies), and 'benifical' (beneficial).
task achievement
Make sure to include specific details about your achievements to strengthen your request for a reference letter.
task achievement
You have expressed your enjoyment of the job clearly and conveyed your reasons for leaving, which is essential in a resignation letter.
task achievement
Your polite tone and gratitude towards your manager demonstrate professionalism.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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