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The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The stack bar chart illustrates the portions of a drug firm's total
sales
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 from 2002 to 2006. There are three continents:
America
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,
Europe
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, and
Asia
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. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, in 2002,
America
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 had the highest
sales
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 with 41 per
cent
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, followed by
Europe
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 with 34 per
cent
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 and
Asia
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 with only 25 per
cent
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, respectively.
However
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,
Europe
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's total
sales
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 increased to become the first at 38 per
cent
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 of total
sales
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, and
Asia
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also
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 rose from 25 per
cent
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 to 35 per
cent
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while
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America
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 downed to the lowest medicine company
sales
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 with just 27 per
cent
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 in 2004.
Furthermore
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,
Asia
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 still significantly continued to grow from 35 per
cent
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 to 40 per
cent
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 and became the most
sales
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 region
whereas
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America
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 and European countries had the same amount of drug's number in 2006. In conclusion,
Asia
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 has an upward trend
while
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Europe
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 fluctuated over four years.
On the other hand
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,
America
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 has a downward sign from 2002 to 2006.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, america, europe, asia, cent with synonyms.
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