You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college manager . In your letter, •explain what you like about the cafeteria •say what is wrong with it •suggest how it could be improved

Dear Sir/Madam, I am eating in our college cafeteria

everyday

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during my lunchtime and

i

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notice some

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problem

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problems

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while

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seating

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sitting

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there.

First

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i

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I

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would like to talk about the good things that

i

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am liking

for

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about

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our canteen that

it's always smell

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it always smells

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fresh, the food that they are serving

their

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them

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it's a fresh and healthy

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and in the kitchen area they are

mainting

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maintaining

cleaness

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cleanness

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,

this

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is

the

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apply

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all reasons that

makes

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me feel to seat and eat there.

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,

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want to

infrom

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inform

you about the main

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that

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is

a

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apply

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music and noise. I

am seating

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sit

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there

everyday

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but sometimes they are playing loud music and some students are

doing

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making

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too much noise so it

will disturbing

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disturbs

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me and

making

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makes

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me more

stressfull

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stressed

because

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am going there for my

lunch time

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lunchtime

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and

making

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my self

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myself

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more

relex

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relax

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having lunch but because of

noise

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the noise

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i

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am not

felling

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feeling

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comfortable now.

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to

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one more

improvment

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improvement

we need

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there

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, that

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just

notice

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noticed

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is water leakage,

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week

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i

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was eating my food

their

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there

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suddenly

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notice

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that our

cafetria's

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cafeterias

cafeteria's

roof is leaking and

its

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it's

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not safe to

seat

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sit

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there. I have a few suggestions

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regarding

this

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problem

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that I would like to share with you. We can close the cafeteria for a few days and do the renovation of the roof, or we can close that specific area where we have

water

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a water

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leakage

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and do the renovation there. I hope you will consider my

this

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problem

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and take some

actions

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as

sson

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soon

as possible. Yours Faithfully.