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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel (measured in tonnes) in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel (measured in tonnes) in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph delineates the fluctuating
production
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 trends of key fuel sources, namely
petroleum
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, coal, and natural
gas
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, within the United Kingdom over a two-decade span from 1981 to 2000. 
Overall
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, a conspicuous trend emerges, with
petroleum
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 consistently dominating the UK's fuel
output
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 throughout the period.
Conversely
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, coal experienced a marked decline,
while
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 natural
gas
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 witnessed a gradual yet significant ascent, ultimately surpassing coal
production
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 by the millennium.
Initially
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,
petroleum
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production
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 commenced at approximately 100,000
tonnes
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, exhibiting a surge to roughly 130,000
tonnes
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 by 1983.
This
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 plateau persisted until 1987, followed by a regression to the baseline figure around 1988.
Subsequently
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, a resurgence culminated in a peak of 130,000
tonnes
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 in 1996, before a marginal contraction to approximately 120,000
tonnes
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 by 2000.
This
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 pattern of volatility underscores the dynamic nature of
petroleum
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 extraction within the UK. In 1981, coal
production
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 stood at 80,000
tonnes
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, double that of natural
gas
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.
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, a precipitous decline ensued, culminating in a
sub-40,000-tonne
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sub-40,000 tonne
output
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 by the end of the period.
This
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 trajectory starkly contrasts with that of natural
gas
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, which maintained a relatively stable
output
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 until 1994.
Thereafter
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, a steady incline propelled natural
gas
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production
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 beyond coal levels by 1997, culminating in an
output
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 exceeding 80,000
tonnes
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 by 2000.
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 crossover signifies a substantial shift in the UK's fuel
production
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 landscape.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, petroleum, gas, output, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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