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An international company is offering job without pay for good experience write a letter to apply for this job in this letter where did you find this information why you want to apply for this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well. I writing
this
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 letter to apply for the post of sports physiotherapist in Kinesis. I came across the job vacancy in
newspaper
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the newspaper
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 and
very
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am very
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 much interested in
this
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 even though it is unpaid. Even though I
am
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have
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 having Master's degree in sports physiotherapy, I
am lacking
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lack
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hands on
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hands-on
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 experience. So, I would like to work in your company and gain vast knowledge and experience from the senior therapists. I have done my
post graduation
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post-graduation
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 specialising in sports from one of the best universities in India.
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, I have completed many certificate courses
form
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from
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 international Physiotherapy schools.
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, I am preparing for
strength
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a strength
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 course which
i
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I
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 am expecting to be
cracked
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completed
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 in one month. I would like to apply for the post of junior physiotherapist and any insights will be appreciated. I am looking forward to your prompt response to my application. Yours faithfully, Santhoshkumar

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Task Achievement
Consider adding a more specific reason for why you want to gain experience at this particular company, as it would strengthen your application.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to proofread for minor grammatical errors such as 'I writing this letter' instead of 'I am writing this letter'.
Task Achievement
The letter has a clear purpose and adequately introduces the position you are applying for.
Coherence and Cohesion
The way you concluded with looking forward to a response is polite and appropriate.
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