You want to sell some of your funiture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter > explain why you are selling > describe the furniture > suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

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Dear Sandy, I hope you're doing well. I writing

this

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letter to let you that

i'm

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selling a

Sofa

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set. I know you like

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sofa

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the sofa

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very much especially

while

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playing video games lying on

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sofa

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the sofa

a sofa

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comfortable

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a comfortable

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position. I'm planning to buy a recliner chair because

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sofa

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is huge and taking more space in my house.

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, my mother finds it difficult to move

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cleaning the floor. So,

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planning to sell it on Amazon

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I remembered that you wanted to buy a

sofa

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. The

sofa

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is large with

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breath and

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length.

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, it has comfortable Cushing with cotton fibres.

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, it is adjustable so you can

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use it as a bed. The major advantage

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this

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sofa

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is,

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that it

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is made of strong wood so it can withstand weights

upto

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up to

400 Kilos. I would like you to visit my house on 22nd, November because it is

sunday

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Sunday

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. We can explore the city like

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in the

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old days and you can inspect the

sofa

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also

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. I expect your

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relpy

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soon With love, Santhoshkumar

ksanthosh701Mon Mar 10 2025

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general

Make sure to proofread your letter to avoid small errors, such as missing words or incorrect punctuation.

coherence

To improve clarity, check for consistency in detail when describing the furniture, especially concerning dimensions.

cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph adheres to one main idea for better flow and organization.

tone

The letter has a friendly tone appropriate for communication with a friend.

content

You described the furniture’s benefits well, which makes it appealing to your friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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You want to sell some of your funiture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter > explain why you are selling > describe the furniture > suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

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