The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart informs about how families in one country spent their wages in the years
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1968 and 2018. 
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while
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families spent
their
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more
quintities
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quantities
of weekly revenue
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buying food in 1968, in 2018 more of them went to leisure.  In 1968, the largest proportion of weekly income was spent on food, accounting for approximately 35%. Housing and clothing/footwear followed, with around 10%. Fuel and power, household
goods
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, personal
goods
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, transport, and leisure each received less than 10% of the weekly income. By 2018, there were notable shifts in spending patterns. Leisure became the largest expense, increasing to above 20% of weekly income. Spending on food decreased significantly to approximately 15%. Housing saw a substantial rise, reaching approximately 20%, making it the
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category. Transport
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increased, accounting for about 15%. Spending on clothing and footwear dropped to around 15%,
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fuel and power, household
goods
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, and personal
goods
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remained relatively stable, each at around 5-8%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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