The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given

map

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illustrates information about a science park in 2008 and today.

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, it can be notably seen that paths have been constructed in order to facilitate connection between innovation centres, car parks, cyber security and stations.

Moreover

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, cycle paths have been constructed on certain sides of the area. On the north side of the

map

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, grassland has been removed,

while

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research and development have been built in the area. Reception has been changed to the university hub and a path

have

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been constructed from the hub to the car park. Business units have remained unchanged, but the car park has been extended. On the south side of the

map

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, the IT centre has been turned into an innovation centre,

while

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the woodland has remained unaltered. New stations have been erected,

besides

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this

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, cyber security has been extended. Railway roads have remained the same at the bottom of the

map

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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