You are currently taking a course at a university but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the university of Dean. In the letter: •Give details of your course •Explain why you need a week off •Say what you want the Dean to do.

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Dear Sir, I am Sakshi Kansara, my student number is N0147802 and I am currently enrolled in

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learning course for 6 weeks. I am writing

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letter in

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request

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a week off as I am visiting my family in India

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uncertain circumstances, as my grandmother is ill and I have to be present there for her. As it is a language learning course, missing a class would be a huge drawback for my grades.

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, I request you to ask

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the professor

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if he can record his lectures in the class so later on I can watch the videos and learn

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I am in India. On

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hand, I can take up

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extra classes too once I am back here.

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, I will always be available via email or text message, if

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there are any concerns.

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, I request you to approve my leave of absence as it is essentially crucial for me and I will make sure my grades are not affected because of

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week off. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sakshi

kshakshi16Mon Mar 10 2025

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Consider adding a brief introduction stating the purpose of your letter more explicitly at the beginning.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity. For instance, consider separating your request and your rationale more distinctly.

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Adding a more formal closing statement could enhance the tone of the letter.

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Your letter has a polite tone throughout, which is appropriate for correspondence with the Dean.

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You clearly state your situation and request, making it easy for the reader to understand your need for a week off.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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