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economy
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the economy
money
has been becoming a sign to determine Use synonyms
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people
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whether people
rich
or not. Add a missing verb
are rich
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people
look upon saving Use synonyms
money
earlier Use synonyms
is
better, Correct your spelling
as
another
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other
people
refer to it as something not really important. I am in favour of the former, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.
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To begin
with, having enough Linking Words
money
whenever can help Use synonyms
people
to face Use synonyms
the
emergency Correct article usage
an
incedent
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incident
moreover
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also
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provide
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provides
an
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apply
insurence
for things Correct your spelling
insurance
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that happened
happened
too suddenly to perpared. Wrong verb form
happen
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money
is necessary for Use synonyms
human's
life, Change noun form
human
we
should save it earlier. Take Correct word choice
and we
myself
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me
have
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has
deposite
, and I Correct your spelling
deposited
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was injuried
injuried
in a car accident Correct your spelling
injured
last
year. Linking Words
Fortunely
, I had enough funding to Correct your spelling
Fortunately
supported
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support
me
during that time I Correct pronoun usage
myself
cannot
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could not
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income for my daily Change the verb form
earn
consume
.
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consumption
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money
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to influence
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in influencing
people
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reach
their aims or not. Add the particle
to reach
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, if younger did not save Linking Words
money
when they were still young, they would not have intensive to invent their Use synonyms
dream
, Change the noun form
dreams
such
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further
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reserch
or the Correct your spelling
research
tuitor
of professional skills. Correct your spelling
tutor
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the essay from National Taiwan University, 64% Linking Words
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people
admitted they Change preposition
of people
were
really regret that Unnecessary verb
apply
thay
put all of Correct your spelling
they
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money
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their money
on
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into
entertanment
when they were young, if they had another chance, they would Correct your spelling
entertainment
deposite
it rather than Correct your spelling
deposit
spent
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spend
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it for
for
fun.
In conclusion, young Change preposition
on
people
should save Use synonyms
money
for their future because fortune can help them Use synonyms
acheiving
their goals faster and easier and Correct your spelling
achieve
supporting
them Wrong verb form
support
to imply
urgent Verb problem
in
situation
.Fix the agreement mistake
situations
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